Sunday, 8 March 2015

PIPE SWAM GREEN CAREFULLY HORSE by Sophia

The small buckle fell to the ground and down the green pipe. The buckle was supposed to hold the saddle to the horse and so this caused the rider to fall off and fall to the ground. Meanwhile, the buckle floated along the pipe and clean water swam behind it pushing it along.

The rider could not afford a new saddle so she needed to get the buckle removed from the drain pipe immediately before it was pushed any further and was lost forever. Panicking, the rider stuck her hand into the narrow pipe and carefully pulled the buckle out.
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19 comments:

  1. Anonymous9 March 2015 at 11:55

    Good description but I could not quite get the story.

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  3. Anonymous9 March 2015 at 11:57

    Good description but I could not quite get the story.
    Sam B

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  4. Anonymous9 March 2015 at 11:58

    Great story Sophia, I really like the description and detail that you have put in. by Jemima

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  5. Anonymous9 March 2015 at 11:58

    Well done you story is very interesting. I like the story a lot. You have used quite a lot of description.
    By Jessica

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  7. Anonymous9 March 2015 at 12:01

    This story is very interesting and you have used a lot of description.
    By Eleanor

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  8. Anonymous9 March 2015 at 12:04

    I liked your story ideas and you had good description.
    Will J

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  9. Anonymous9 March 2015 at 12:09

    I like your story and you have done a lot of description keep it up Sophia. By Demi

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  10. Anonymous9 March 2015 at 12:09

    Very good Sophia keep it up with your typing skills in English.

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  11. Anonymous9 March 2015 at 12:10

    Well done by Madison good description

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  12. Anonymous9 March 2015 at 12:10

    I really like your story but some I didn't get some of it. Rose K

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  13. Anonymous9 March 2015 at 12:11

    I really enjoyed reading your 100 WC it was really good I hope others read it too! I loved how you used punctuation and how you put a lot of hard work into this. But it was a bit strange!
    By Morgan

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  14. Anonymous9 March 2015 at 12:11

    I like your story and you have done a lot of description keep it up Sophia. By Demi

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  15. Anonymous9 March 2015 at 12:11

    Very good Sophia keep it up with your typing skills in English.
    By/Courtneychallis

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  16. Anonymous9 March 2015 at 12:12

    I like the story Sophia. Maybe you should give the horse rider a name so you don't have to keep saying the rider.
    Maddie T

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  17. Anonymous9 March 2015 at 12:13

    Thanks for the input and advice I will listen to it
    Sophia

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  18. Anonymous9 March 2015 at 12:13

    I like the story soph
    Lily

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  19. Anonymous9 March 2015 at 12:14

    Keep up the good work Sophia I can't wait to read your next 100 word challenge#

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