When I went on an airplane for the very first time I was six
years old. We flew from Stansted airport to the island of Madeira. As I boarded
the airplane it looked huge from where I stood, as I walked up the steps into
the cabin I looked through the pilot's window and I saw him turn around and
wave to me. I sat down and fastened my seat belt, then when I looked out of the
plain window we were starting to move and soon we were in the sky flying really
high. Guess what, we really had a good time on our holiday with my family.
I think you did a good job and you used description and it was a great story and i like the bit when you said as I walked up the steps into the cabin I looked through the pilot's window and I saw him turn around and wave to me i think that was a good bit
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I liked your description but I would not go on that plane.
ReplyDeleteWill J
I love your story Charlie. I think it makes sense all the way through. Rose K
ReplyDeleteWELL done it is very good
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