Sunday, 8 March 2015

… then when I looked out of the plane window… by Aron

I said to Tom on the phone, "I got to go, because I have to pack! We’re moving to Australia remember!" and I packed my last suitcase.

The car journey was long and boring. Finally we reached our destination, Luton Airport. The screen was showing, "Final call for gate number 103!" so we quickly got our bags and boarded the plane. We took our places. I got the best one, close to the window. The plane took off into the air. Then when I looked out of the plane window and saw that amazing view. Everything looked so small. Tiny people houses and cars, like from a fantasy world.


  1. Mollie
    Wow Aron this was so moving and I think that you did a really good job. It made me feel like I was with you and you should make it longer, like a story and put it on Edmodo this story is so good it makes me feel like I'm on a plane moving to Australia. Keep up the good work!

  2. Kieran
    Good job, lots of description and I like how you've put the prompt in. I really feel like Im in the plane myself.
    Good job.

  3. Sophia
    This is a brilliant story Aron. It was very good. When you look out of a plane window there really is an astounding veiw.
    Keep up the good work Sophia

  4. Aron that is a really good story. The speech that you have used was good. by Jemima