It was just 3 days until I went to Benidorm, I was so excited. Time flew by, the day of my trip soon came. After our heavy luggage and plane tickets had been checked we got on the plane. I was hoping to see lots of great things out of the plane window. We were flying over France, I was fascinated by the wonderful view, then when I looked out of the plane window I saw the Eiffel Tower. I was amazed at what I saw. Then when we got to Benidorm I saw many more landmarks and great things.
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