Saturday, 21 March 2015

Mia …as they turned the corner… 100WC#26

It was a long spooky night I saw a monsters coming STOMP! I was frightened as they turned the corner. I sneakily ran into the kitchen but all of a sudden I woke up - it was 10.00am. I looked down the corridor then I realised the monster was all a dream - which was good.
Today was my mum and dad’s 20th anniversary so I made them breakfast in bed which I found very fun. I made 100 pancakes so they got fifty each. This was fair they told me. It was very yummy. I was proud of myself.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Mia
    This is a really interesting 100 word challenge and I like the way you have written it almost as two short pieces that link. You created a real sense of tension in the first section with the monsters coming after you and then you changed the whole atmosphere with the introduction of your parents anniversary - a nice happy ending! Well done.
    Ms O'Keeffe (team 100wc)