Saturday, 24 February 2018

In the forest by Ella

In the forest there are many strange things, people sometimes disappear. The trees make faces and move behind your back. The leaves scuttle around your feet without the wind. The vines grab your feet and pull you down, trying to take you under the ground. But whatever you do, don't call for help. The noise angers the trees, they turn into warriors and frighten you deeper into the forest. Branches, twisted into fingers, claw at your skin. You end up with cuts and bruises that never heal. As you flee in terror, you start to notice the tree warriors surrounding you.

1 comment:

  1. I really like how you build this up to be a pretty frightening account of the forest. In particular, cuts and bruises that never heal, is gruesome! You really made me think - thank you.
    dw (Team100)