Saturday 24 February 2018

The Invasion by Tyler S

They are here to take over the world. They're going to kill every creature in sight. They are vicious pieces of wood that have finally pulled themselves free from the thick trees. The only way they can be stopped is by being lit on fire. They seem to know a unique type of combat and are preparing themselves in the forest. Nobody is aware of the small army of ruthless Stickmen coming from revenge. They have been alerted by the smaller broken twigs which are scattered across the park with only humans to blame. The battle is about to commence....

3 comments:

  1. It is refreshing to read a story in the present tense. Good use of vocabulary.

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  2. Good use of adjectives i liked it

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  3. Great story Tyler,I love how you've decided to use present tense instead of past tense

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