Saturday 24 February 2018

Trees by Lexi

"It's coming!" barked Dan, heroically grabbing his children and running off into the distance. Screams of horror echoed throughout the world. All humans had now disappeared, and every man-made thing had crumbled into a pile of rubble. All that was left on the earth was trees. But what could they do, sit around and wait to be destroyed? No! They would run too. One by one, they ripped their roots out of the earth and sprinted past thorns and nettles, their slender bodies aching with pain. "Snap! Crack!" They were death's prey. The end was in sight, or was it?

5 comments:

  1. My favourite part was when you wrote "one by one, they ripped their roots out of the earth," - nice alliteration :)

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  2. I like the vocabulary that you used when you used stuff like slender and kind of like the to be continued at the end that was really good i really liked that. nice use of vocabulary and cliff hangers



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  3. Good vocabulary! Enough speech to make it flow.

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  4. very good story!!

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  5. I thought it was good

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