Wednesday 19 March 2014

…look up! Can you see… by Leah

“Look up! Can you see all of the beautiful stars shining high up in the sky?” I exclaimed.All of the stars were shining bright in the clear sky, they were sparkling, and it was magical. The full, bright moon glistened and sparkled, you could clearly see the stars glimmering in the distance. The stars were glittering in the dark sky. They were shimmering, twinkling, gleaming and they were sparkling! They were more than beautiful; they were gorgeous, lovely, and delightful. The moon was dazzling and shimmering in the sky in my opinion it was astonishing and very, very wonderful.

2 comments:

  1. Well done Leah! What a lot of excellent adjectives you used; your story is so descriptive! It makes me imagine just how lovely the sky was! Keep up the good work.

    -Sam Team 100WC

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