Jack and William were playing football outside.
Everything was normal until Jack looked into the sky. "Look up! Can you see the spaceship?" He said in awe. William stopped and looked. They both saw something that defiantly wasn't a plane - It looked like something from Star Wars!
After that, neither of them said anything until Will broke the silence. "We need to tell somebody about this! We'll get rich and famous for discovering aliens!" Jack agreed so they went inside to tell their parents. "Mum, Dad! There's a spaceship!" They squealed. No-one believed them so they went in the garden again. The spaceship had GONE.
Well done Anh, a good 100wc. Always check your spelling before posting. A common error when using auto correct is "defiantly".
ReplyDeleteHi Anh - well done with your writing for this week's 100WC. I really like how you've chosen some interesting words and phrases to make your writing interesting for the reader. I'm not surprised no-one believed them though, are you?
ReplyDeleteSu Harris (team 100WC Suffolk UK)
WOW. that is a great story. Seeing a spaceship is very rare.
ReplyDeleteJoshua Simpson