One day Fred was outside riding his bike with his best friend Tom they enjoyed riding their bikes and going into the tall woods. So every day after their long, hard school time they would venture into the woods. After that they rode down a small, windy path made of concrete and then Fred muttered to Tom "Look up! Can you see that strange shadow glaring right at us." Eventually Tom looked up to see for himself and what he saw was absolutely incredible! It was white and green and it was shaped exactly like an oval. Its a SPACESHIP!
To Finlay
ReplyDeleteWonderful writing! I did not expect your ending! Imagine.... to see a spaceship when you looked up!
Your writing is full of descriptive language that kept me engaged all the way though.
A great use of this week's prompt.
From Mrs Natusch
Team 100WC
NZ
PS - I enjoyed getting an entry from NZ to comment on this week!