Wednesday 19 March 2014

…look up! Can you see.. by Millie C

Once there was a giant that controlled all the clouds and one day he put all the clouds together so no one could see the sun and they couldn't see the blue sky either. There was one girl called Sarah and she flew up in a plane into the sky. Then she went outside the plane and climbed on top of the plane and jumped onto a cloud. She carried on walking and saw the giant in the distance so she ran up to him and pulled out her sword and killed him. Look up! Can you see that the clouds are splitting up! YEY!  

1 comment:

  1. Hi Millie
    I really enjoyed reading your submission for the 100 Word Challenge this week.
    You managed to complete a whole story from begining to end within your word allowance!
    A really nice piece of creative writing.
    Keep up the great work, well done!

    Best wishes,

    Saran (Team 100).

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