Sunday 8 March 2015

… then when I looked out of the plane window…by Caitlin

Today I am going on a seaplane tour and I can't wait. When I had arrived at the seaplane I was so excited I hopped inside and it took off across the ocean. It got better and better the higher up we got. Then when I looked out of the plane window a beautiful school of dolphins swam past us. The sea shone in amazing colours as we passed hundreds of fish. I held tight as the plane slowly landed in the water. As I got off the plane I knew I would remember this day forever as a very special day.

5 comments:

  1. I love your story, its very good description and I like the build up to it and the part about the dolphins. You can really get a picture of where you are in the story. Grace

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  2. I like your story a lot. My favorite animals are dolphins. I really get a picture about your story.
    By Jessica

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  3. I like this story you are very good at doing these things and you used description and i like the bit when you put Then when I looked out of the plane window a beautiful school of dolphins swam past us i liked that bit you did a very good job well done Caitlin.

    By Olivia

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  4. I really liked your 100 word challenge because you described how the plane landed and you included the prompt.
    by Eleanor

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  5. I like your story because you used good description. My Favourite part was the bit where the school of dolphins swam past.
    By Annabelle

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