Friday 8 November 2013

Leah 100 Word Challenge #10

A long time ago there was a dark and gloomy street where the leaves rustled and rattled and where nobody dared go, until one day. That day was when some mysterious wellington boots stuck in a puddle. There were news crews, paramedics, police and helicopters. Nobody knew what was happening yet everybody was interested! Nobody knew if it was just a joke or real life! This was a very big deal for everyone involved. The wellington boots were so filthy, mucky muddy and horrendous that you could not even look at them, nether did anyone else.
Guess what happened next?

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2 comments:

  1. DBall8 November 2013 at 07:01

    Excellent descriptions and word choices.
    What did happen next?

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  2. MikeCamel9 November 2013 at 13:14

    Leah -

    That's a really mean ending, leaving your readers guessing, but it's very effective! Sometimes repeating words too often can mean they are less effective, but the way that you have used "Nobody" twice at the beginning of sentences works very well. There is also some good vocabulary here: well done.

    -Mike.

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