Saturday 23 November 2013

Joshua - Letter in a bottle

Do not worry about anything. Even though you have got off to a rough start everything will turn out perfectly in the end, so just be strong and you will have your normal life back as you were before this terrible storm had come. In a few days you will have your own house with your mum and dad and be safe until that happens. People will look after you and will take care of you and will send you money for the rest of your life. Take care. But never give up hope until that day.

2 comments:

  1. A very positive message of hope, Joshua.
    I think the second half of your second sentence maybe needs rephrasing or punctuating differently.

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  2. Hi Joshua, What a great message in a bottle - full of hope and reassurance. Children need to know that there is someone who will look after them. I very much like your second sentence - Even though you have got off to a rough start everything will turn out perfectly in the end - it almost sounds as though you are speaking directly to someone you know very well. Well done.
    Mrs Fine 100WC Team (Surrey, UK)

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