The violent storm was…
The violent storm was extremely ferocious as the soggy wet rain drizzled down from the dark, gloomy, grey and extremely cloudy sky, whilst the wind blow the dark brown and yellow leaves. The leaves also jumped and waved all around the little wet and drowsy town. The children were all bouncing all over the town whilst the mums and dads started to panic because all of their things were blowing all over the place, even though most of their things had already blown away because of the terrible storm, which was causing all of the mess.
You have crammed in a lot of adjectives, especially in your first sentence. I am not sure about your use of bouncing children and what you were trying to describe.
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