Once when I went on holiday not so long ago me and my family went on holiday to a place called Kelling Heath. One day me and my brother went on our bikes to explore. We went riding down really narrow paths, on each side there was a long line of very prickly bushes. I hoped I wouldn't fall into them but unfortunately I did and it was particularly painful. An hour later I had about one hundred dots on my left leg and fifty on my left arm. But now I think it is very funny plus painful!
Hi Talia,
ReplyDeleteYou have written a lovely story here. It is well punctuated and uses some lovely description. I'm not really sure how it links to the prompt though!
Mr Connor
Year 5 teacher
Derby, UK