Saturday 23 November 2013

Talia - Letter in a bottle

Hope for the best but it will only work if you believe in yourself and other people. If you do you could make a village an actual village which you can live in a house in it and live a happy life. Not just you to make a village but to encourage other people to do is well. But it could happen if you work together help each other and share plus comfort people that have been through a bad time like lost a family member or members. Also wish that something like this wouldn’t happen again.

2 comments:

  1. Talia you have expressed some very positive thoughts.
    Look carefully at your third sentence - does it make sense?
    Make sure you read through your work carefully.

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  2. Talia, you have some wonderful ideas about working together to over come these obstacles. You can try reading your work aloud and listening to make sure it makes sense, and to make sure you used the words you planned to use. Keep up the great effort.

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