Smiling, Jasmine skipped to the car.
"So Jasmine what kind of pet do you want?" asked Mrs Finsen.
"I want...a...fish!" squealed Jasmine excitedly.
Now that Jasmine was seven her mum promised her a pet. It seemed like forever, but Jasmine finally arrived at the pet shop. At the end of looking, Jasmine found a gold fish.
Jasmine took the fish home and was going to feed it for the first time, but when she lifted the lid the food jumped out of the pot and into the fish's mouth.
Hi there Romola. This is very well written. Great use of the prompt and we are impressed by your punctuation use. Keep it up.
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