I would be a good night zoo keeper because I am not afraid
of the dark and I absolutely hate evil. I love nature and I will not let any
sort of monsters damage the environment or any of its creatures. I will watch
the night zoo gates at all times and I will ignore all distractions around me
until it is safe for the animals to let me leave them and for them to do their
own thing. I love animals and I do not want them to suffer just because some
monsters are coming round and scaring them.
You did a good job of listing all the good reasons as to why you should be the next Night Zoo Keeper, telling about why you would be good for the job and how much you care for the animals. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteI think you will be a good zoo keeper however explain the monsters a bit more.
DeleteReally good Joshua, your a good writer for a year four.
ReplyDeleteyou've used great vocab.
Not bad Joshua, your a great writer for a year four. I really like your use of using vocab, you can use them really well. However I have a few dislikes and improvements, every opnener starts with an I which you should change.
ReplyDeleteThis is coming from a professional writer, Ferdous.