On a distant island in the south of Spain there sitting by the calm, clear blue sea was a young boy called Frank. When it was time to go to bed for Frank he snuggled under his soft comfortable duvet. Suddenly an hour later he heard a very peculiar sound just outside of their brand new hand made wooden house! After that Frank went straight outside to see what was the very strange problem. When he arrived outside of his house there was a very weird alien pushing through the earth trying to get to me. Oh no I'm scared!
Hi Finlay. Well done fir using different adjectives to describe your setting; I like the idea of the calm, blue sea. I can see that you are trying to use subordinate clauses in your writing - well done - just be careful where you put the commas. Good use of connectives at the beginning of your sentences.
ReplyDeleteWell done for entering this week’s 100 word challenge.
Miss Willing (Team 100WC)
Huntingdon, England