Saturday 1 March 2014

Lewis #23

"AHHH"Shouted Sam. Suddenly a alien was pushing through the Earth's crust! Nobody knew what to do! Soon The RAF arrived bombing this alien and killing some civilians as well! Because the alien came from the Earth's crust a volcano soon followed them, this meant most of the town would be destroyed by this magnificent rath.  Some more of these things plunged from the Earth's crust! When these aliens stand in lava they grow bigger better and strong. So the only way to stop the aliens would be to destroy the volcano. They plugged the volcano and the aliens disappeared forever , but nobody knew where..............

1 comment:

  1. WOW Lewis what an action packed piece of writing you have written. I love your use of adjectives to describe what was happening in your story. Well Done

    Miss K
    100WC Team
    Melbourne Australia

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